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Indifference hides her yearning
Yearning for attention and a heart beating
Beating for thought of love and sweetness
Sweetness of a kiss and a tight embrace
Her only fear is about losing him
a thought scarier than dying itself
How can she lose something never earned
Earned through time and grace and passion
Passion instills the promise of forever
Forever is a year, maybe a month or a day
Tomorrow may come and she may awaken
She will wake in a dark dungeon, alone
Alone as if nothing holds her world still
Her world that's engulfed in forever
The forever promised before reality spoke
Spoke of loss, of tears, of sorrow, of cold
The cold heart now beats for her
Her warmth shadowed by a dream's loss
Loss of hope and dreams of forever
Forever her eyes will shed tears of sadness
Tears from hazel orbs that once shined
Shined like the moon in a starless sky
The sky that should've kept the promise of forever
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:iconmyke0617:
wow...ganda naman...natatamaan ako...galing galing you talga...sobrang idol..

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Know the real me...I won't hide anything...
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Gaaaah, I am jealooouuus.
Why can't I write like that????
BUt then it would ruin all the beauty.
Hucking Fell....
This is awesome.

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Screw Prince Charming, I'm waiting for my Edward Cullen.


Bye => Maggie, Cloe, Camille...
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nice.. this one's good to go.. though i had a hard time capturing your writing style. but it's a thumbs up for me..

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:iconmy-unanswered-prayer:
at the moment im just trying to find what my wrting is about and what it should be.. so right now i dont have a specific style.. and it really shows because it varies with every poem that i write..anyway.. thanks for liking it...take care

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see....told you...marami din comment for you....congratz!!!!

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